2016年6月大学英语六级考试真题精析(第一套)
Part I Writing
【范文】
As a result of the rapid development of information technology,people nowadays can have easy access to the high-speed Internet,opening a door toward a virtual world which actually has exerted a great influence on the way people live and communicate.
There is no denying that the Internet has become an indispensable part of people's daily life,bringing them unprecedented experience and recreations.However,when people spend more and more time in the virtual world,they are prone to be addicted to it,wasting their time,isolating themselves from the real world and becoming indifferent to people and things around.What they face every day is an environment lack of emotions and real human interest,which is apparently detrimental to physical and moral integrity.As we know,it is interpersonal interaction and face-to-face communication that make us human,so it is crucial to draw a distinction between the virtual world and the real one.
To sum up,it is high time we paid due attention to the adverse trend that people are increasingly obsessed with the virtual world.Do keep in mind that we take advantage of technologies to make our life better,instead of being reduced to a slave of them.
【译文】
由于信息技术的快速发展,如今的人们可以很容易地连接上高速的互联网,从而打开通往虚拟世界的大门,而这事实上对人们的生活和交流方式产生了巨大的影响。
不可否认的是,互联网已经成为人们日常生活不可或缺的一部分,给人们带来了前所未有的体验和娱乐消遣。然而,当人们把越来越多的时间耗费在虚拟世界时,他们容易沉迷其中无法自拔,造成时间的浪费,与真实世界隔绝,对周围的人和事物变得冷漠。每天面对的是一个缺乏情感和真正人情味的环境,这显然对身心健康不利。我们知道,正是人际交往和面对面的交流使我们具有人情味,所以把虚拟世界和真实世界区分开是极其重要的。
总之,我们是时候充分注意到人们越来越沉迷于虚拟世界这一不利趋势了。务必牢记,我们利用技术是为了使我们的生活更美好,而不是沦为技术的奴隶。
【要点用法】
information technology 信息技术
indifferent 不关心的,冷漠的
crucial 极其重要的
have access to 获得;接近
human interest 人情味
draw a distinction between 对……加以区分
exert influence on 对……产生影响
be detrimental to 对……有利
indispensable 不可或缺的
physical and moral integrity adverse 身心健康不利的
unprecedented 前所未有的
be obsessed with 沉迷于,
be prone to 容易,倾向于
interpersonal 人际的 对……着迷
isolate 使隔绝
interaction 互动,相互作用
be reduced to 沦为
【句法点评】
1.As a result of the rapid development of information technology,people nowadays can have easy access to the high-speed Internet,opening a door toward a virtual world which actually has exerted a great influence on the way people live and communicate.
用一个长句开篇,点明文章论述的主题。非谓语结构和定语从句连用,为文章增色。
2.There is no denying that the Internet has become an indispensable part of people's daily life,bringing them unprecedented experience and recreations.
主体段首句欲抑先扬,论证思路缜密。同位语从句和非谓语结构连用,陈述网络和虚拟世界的正面作用。
3.However,when people...,they are prone to be addicted to it,wasting their time,isolating themselves from the real world and becoming indifferent to people and things around.
转折句自然过渡,引出全文论述的重点,即阐明沉迷于虚拟世界的不利影响。三个并列的非谓语结构连用,行文流畅,表达有气势。
4.What they face every day is an environment lack of emotions and real human interest,which is apparently detrimental to physical and moral integrity.
进一步揭示过分沉迷于虚拟世界的负面影响,符合题干要求。主语从句和非限制定性定语从句的使用使表达富有变化。
5.As we know,it is interpersonal interaction and face-to-face communication that make us human,so it is crucial to draw a distinction between the virtual world and the real one.
提出解决办法,即人们应该区分虚拟世界和现实世界。主从复合句和强调句的使用增强了表达效果,彰显写作功力。
6.Do keep in mind that we take advantage of technologies to make our life better,instead of being reduced to a slave of them.
文章末句进一步强化论点,使用宾语从句强调人类利用技术是为了使生活更美好,而不应过度沉迷其中,应避免沦为技术的奴隶。