Part I Writing
Upon graduation, every college student is facing such a difficult problem as what to do next.Students' opinions differ greatly on this issue.
For some, they hold that it is a matter of course to find a job somewhere upon graduation.For others, they believe it is high time that they should start a business of their own. For me, I would like to find a job first.
For one thing, I want to be independent of my parents, financing myself soon after graduation. What's more, finding a good job in a big company is what my parents are expecting, and I don't want to let them down.For another, as for me, without any family business background, to start a business of my own means that I have to start from scratch. Under such circumstances, it is better for me to find a job first, because only in this way can I learn from the directors and colleagues, gaining working and social experience.
In short, to find a job somewhere in a big company is my choice.
毕业之际，每一位大学生都面临着一个难题，那就是接下来要做什么。在这个问题上，学生们的观点有着很大差异。有些学生认为毕业后当然要在某个地方找一份工作，而其他学生则认为是时候自己创业了。对我来说，我想先找一份工作。
一方面，毕业后我不想再依赖父母，想很快获得经济独立。而且，我在大公司找一份好工作也是父母所期盼的，我不想让他们失望。另一方面，我没有任何家族企业背景，所以对我来说创业意味着要白手起家。在这种情况下，我最好还是先找一份工作，因为只有这样我才能向主管和同事们学习，积累工作经验和社交经验。
总之，我的选择就是在某家大公司找一份工作。
要点用法
upon graduation 毕业之际
let sb.down 让某人失望
differ 不同，相异
background 背景
a matter of course 理所当然的事，必然的事
start from scratch 白手起家，从头开始
for one thing… for another… 一方面……另一方面……
under such circumstances 在这种情况下
independent of 独立于，不依赖于
gain 获得，增加
finance 为……提供资金
social experience 社交经验
what's more 而且
in short 总之，简言之
句法点评
1.Upon graduation, every college student is facing such a difficult problem as what to do next.
本句主干结构为every college student is facing… problem。其中，such a difficult problem as…中包含一个由as引导的定语从句，修饰先行词problem。
2.For some, they hold that it is a matter of course to find a job somewhere upon graduation.
本句是一个复合句，主语是they, 谓语动词是hold, that引导宾语从句。在这个宾语从句中，it是形式主语，to find a job somewhere upon graduation是真正的主语，因主语太长，为保持句子平衡而用it作形式主语，而将真正的主语后置。
3.For others, they believe it is high time that they should start a business of their own.
本句是一个复合句，主语是they, 谓语动词是believe, 后面的宾语从句使用了虚拟语气。It's time + that clause中的that可省略，time可由high, about等词修饰，从句中的谓语动词有两种形式：用动词的过去式（be用werE） 和用should +动词原形（should不能省略）。此句型为虚拟语气句型，表示“现在某人该做某事了”。
4.…it is better for me to find a job first, because only in this way can I learn from the directors and colleagues, gaining working and social experience.
本句是一个复合句，在because引导的原因状语从句中包含一个only置于句首形成的半倒装句（表现为can I learn from, 即助动词can提到了主语I的前面），gaining working and social experience是现在分词短语作结果状语。